I woke up to dishes smashing
And people arguing with passion
Cars were crashing
And buildings' turning sideways like the world was collapsing
Just then I realized it was a dream I was still in
I went from the most peaceful dream to the dream I dreaded the most
The one i actually have to wake up from
The one I will remember the most
But if I died in this dream it would leave me in limbo
I'm considering that option
To be continued...
*This is a piece I have been working on based upon a movie I seen a couple months back. Thought I might share it and get some feedback as to where I should take this poem*
-L@dee Po3t
www.wix.com/jones1987/poeticallyinclined
Wednesday, October 20, 2010
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- Poetically_Inclined
- By way of Cleveland, United States
- IM A POET. Two published books. A Writers Ambition & By way of Cleveland. Both can be purchased from my website. www.wix.com/jones1987/poeticallyinclined